doktor_bolzen: (Пушкен - Я невъебенный пиит!)
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Кроша эмаль, скрипят моляры,
Электризуясь, шерсть искрит,
Ушей алеют капилляры,
Сверкают когти - апатит,

Глаза горят люциферазой,
Из пасти стон: "Твою едрит!"
В нутрях Дегидрая Геназа,
Её терзает аппетит.

В минуты капают секунды...
Сейчас закроют на замок.
Простой маркшейдер из Пицунды
Спешит. Гипоталамус взмок...

Успел! В последнее мгновенье!
- Раствор це-два-аш-пять-о-аш!
Обнял сосуд с приобретеньем...
- Ну, рифма, я на абордаж!

Ему свезло, но есть пииты
Кои везде опоздуют...
Какого чёрта поздно ночью
Им алкоголь не продают?..


© bolzen

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Date: 2013-05-13 04:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ufa-tatarin.livejournal.com
"Гипоталамус взмок" - уже за это нужно навеки занести данное стихотворение в анналы истории!)

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Date: 2013-05-13 04:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doktor-bolzen.livejournal.com
вот уж точно)))

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Date: 2013-05-13 04:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schwarze-pferd.livejournal.com
Адское адьё!)

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божекакаяпрелесть!

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Date: 2013-05-13 04:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doktor-bolzen.livejournal.com
Привет)))
новый юпик приобрела?!

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Date: 2013-05-13 04:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pro100-to-read.livejournal.com
взбадривает утром в понедельник

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Date: 2013-05-13 04:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doktor-bolzen.livejournal.com
это же замечательно!

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Date: 2013-05-13 04:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flavoristka.livejournal.com
зашаталась от прочитанного написанного
явственно поняла, что многое в жизни прошло мимо
Edited Date: 2013-05-13 04:28 am (UTC)

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Date: 2013-05-13 05:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morkoy.livejournal.com
Все враки это! Ты сам признался что не пьешь. И сим стихом нас вводишь в заблужденье. А кабы был как все, так знал об чем мечта пиита поздно ночью. И ранним утром троекратно.
Но я тебе не выдам тайну сю.

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Date: 2013-05-13 05:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doktor-bolzen.livejournal.com
больное воображение же
вот и заблуждаю всех

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Date: 2013-05-13 05:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flavoristka.livejournal.com
да
не мокрый, а вернее потный [взмокший] гипоталамус

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Date: 2013-05-13 05:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doktor-bolzen.livejournal.com
да кто его знает, какой он

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Date: 2013-05-13 05:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ipohyi.livejournal.com
Доброго Док-Димон)))Чëт навеяло иза кино каковта...А! "Опирация "С Новым Годом"! -Упакуйте их в гипс! -Лучше в цемент!)))
Солнечно-витаминахо дня тебе!!!)))

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Date: 2013-05-13 06:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doktor-bolzen.livejournal.com
привет)) витаминов только и не хватает!

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Date: 2013-05-13 06:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moltshun.livejournal.com
здравствуй, друг гипоталамус!
это я, твой друг гипофиз,
тоже взмокший чрезмерно
от нагрузок мозговых.
если нынче не ослабнет
мозговое напряженье
утону с тут в работе
не увидев берегов.

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Date: 2013-05-13 06:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doktor-bolzen.livejournal.com
Люда, зацени "Дегидрую Геназу"))

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Date: 2013-05-13 06:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valse-boston.livejournal.com
а нефиг на магазины надеяться - свое надо иметь )

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Date: 2013-05-13 06:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doktor-bolzen.livejournal.com
самогонный аппарат?!

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Date: 2013-05-13 07:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rockerface.livejournal.com
и ведь как показывает практика, впрок не запасешься

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Date: 2013-05-13 07:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blackreset.livejournal.com
ничего не понял, но одобряю!

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Date: 2013-05-13 08:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doktor-bolzen.livejournal.com
что непонятно? разъясним!

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Date: 2013-05-13 09:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] allsea.livejournal.com
Классно получилось :)))

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Date: 2013-05-13 09:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doktor-bolzen.livejournal.com
спасибо))

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Date: 2013-05-13 09:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luisandra.livejournal.com
Привет, горным инженерам всегда везет)

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Date: 2013-05-13 09:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doktor-bolzen.livejournal.com
привет))
наверное, звёзды к ним благоволят, ведь видят их реже

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Date: 2013-05-13 09:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vikky-lukoje.livejournal.com
ахахахах
Док, ну ты в ударе!!
лучшее
сохранила себе

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Date: 2013-05-13 09:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doktor-bolzen.livejournal.com
дык надо ж компенсировать долгое отсутствие

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Date: 2013-05-13 09:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arcobalen0.livejournal.com
спать надо!
по ночам...

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Date: 2013-05-13 09:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doktor-bolzen.livejournal.com
спим! и видим этот ужас...

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Date: 2013-05-13 01:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kipelovna.livejournal.com
Дим-Док, ты никак самогоноварением озадачился?

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Date: 2013-05-13 02:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doktor-bolzen.livejournal.com
бхх))) пока нет

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Date: 2013-05-13 01:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kuxlya.livejournal.com
глаз задергался..)))

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Date: 2013-05-13 02:11 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2013-05-13 02:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] violet-koala.livejournal.com
А у меня только глазные яблоки потеют... На большее моих анатомических знаний не хватает.
Но со мной сейчас примерно то же, что и с Кириллом, да.

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Date: 2013-05-13 03:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doktor-bolzen.livejournal.com
а где тут анатомия-то?!

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Date: 2013-05-13 05:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] admiral-scheer.livejournal.com
Мне пока про лошадь-морковку больше всего нравится ))

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Date: 2013-05-13 06:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doktor-bolzen.livejournal.com
но та лошадь - не моё, увы

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Date: 2013-05-14 07:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inna1903gr.livejournal.com
как много редких слов, еще и зарифмованных
талант! :-))

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Date: 2013-05-14 07:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doktor-bolzen.livejournal.com
ай спасибо, щас покраснею!

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Date: 2013-05-19 01:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grizzly-ru.livejournal.com
Очень славно получилось!!! :))
Да, тут не только на рифму перейдёшь... :)) Когда оно так и на замке!!! :))
Спасибо! :))

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Date: 2013-05-19 01:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doktor-bolzen.livejournal.com
спасибо за спасибо))

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